We are working on persuasive writing. Yesterday, we looked at things that we might like, or like to change at school. They are pretty reasonable! Now to convince Mr Webby...
Today we are teamed up with our talking partners - knee to knee, and eye to eye - to discuss how we are going to persuade Mr Webby to either change something in the school, or add something to the school. Watch this space to see how it goes when we present Mr Webby with the persuasive writing.
How amazing would it be if we had a relaxing room full of pillows & a gymnastics training room! From Maia Mason
ReplyDeleteI'm persuaded, Maia. Now you'll have to persuade Mr Webby! - Whaea Pip
Deletemr webby will maybe say yes to an inside basketball court - Ash
ReplyDeleteWouldn't that be great, Ash? I hope you do a good job of persuading Mr Webby because then we can play basketball, even if it's raining. - Whaea Pip
DeleteAll day lunchbreak - love it!!
ReplyDeleteThey are a clever bunch coming up with all those great things to write persuasively about! - Whaea Pip
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